Orphaned children, weeping widows, Childless couples, filled with sorrow. Tears flowed, flowers bestowed, For this pain, there was no antidote. Whose fault? No one knows, War surged, like a black rose.
-Ishita Gupta
War
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Amazingly written…I was speechless!!😊
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Thanks a lot!❤
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Very intense
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Thanks!🌸
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You conveyed such feeling of devastation through your words. The rhyme and brevity also magnify the effect. Great poem, loved it.
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Thanks a lot Rachel! That means a lot, coming from you❤❤
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You are most welcome ❤️❤️
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WOW, this is so powerful. Excellent write.
xoxo
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Thank you so much!💞💞🙏🙏
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My pleasure. You deserve plenty of accolades for this piece 💐🌸🤗
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❤❤❤🙏🙏
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Nice Ishita. Deep!
(One comment: I think because you keep the words as ‘quote’ format, in mobile view some texts on the right are not visible..If ok, please keep it normal formatting…thanks)
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Thanks!🌸🌸
In mobile you can just scroll towards the left to see the entire sentence☺
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Tried in vain!🤔
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That’s odd, because it works in my and my friends’ mobiles. 😕
I’ll keep that in mind while posting now
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Anyways, it’s ok. Could be done issues in my side…. Thanks for checking and confirming Ishita. So nice of you.
Keep writing…!
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🙏😇
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