a lone drop
waltzing its way
through the dark claustrophobic tunnel
mindless
about what lies ahead.
feet on releve
dangling in air
relishing a few seconds of freedom
awaiting
it’s fateful end.
one girl
laughing heartily
oblivious to the drop’s paltry demise
worthless
to her royal silk gown.
a little one
with parched lips
her strained throat eyeing the drop
thirstily
like a treasure.
-Ishita Gupta
Beautiful!
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Thank you😊 So happy you found it beautiful❤🌸
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Loved how you juxtaposed what that drop means to two different people! Beautiful and deep, Ishita. ❤️🌷
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Thank you so much dear Punam❤ That was exactly what I was trying to convey😊 I’m so glad you liked it❤❤
xoxoxoxo
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You are so welcome, my dear. ❤️🌷😊
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❤❤
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Profound!
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Thank you!😊💕
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Woah! Deep!
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Thank you! Means a lot❤🌸
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Nice blog. 🙂👍
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That’s really kind of you to say😊 Thank you❤🌸
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There’s great truth in your words….this poem is beautiful
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Oh thank you so much dear Roshni❤❤ This means a lot💕🌸
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💕💕🙂
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Amazing!
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Thank you! Glad you think so😊
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Makes you wonder what might consider us a little drop
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That is true……🌸
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Great!!
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Thanks a lot❤😊
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Beautiful! Deeply allegorical with simple metaphors
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Thank you so much❤🌸💕
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I love your metaphoric way of writing. It’s always so interesting to read!! Loved your post!😊
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Thank you so much Tanvi❤❤ Your words are like a cool summer breeze.
xoxoxo
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Beautiful and tantalizing. 💧🎶
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Thank you so much dear❤❤ Glad you liked it😘😘
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Every drop! 💧
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💧💧❤
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This is a beautiful piece and very cleaver as well. I love the ending. Have a great week Ishita. Love Joni xoxoxox
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Thank you so much my dear Joni. I am so glad you liked it.
Hope your last procedure went smoothly and you are taking care of yourself❤ Love and hugs to you and your family🤗😍
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You are so welcomed. Thank you dear Ishita for asking, yes it did go smoothly. Thank you for your kindness my friend. We feel your thoughts for us and wish you the same. Love and hugs right back at you. Be blessed this week. Love you, Joni ❤️🤗❤️
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I am glad to hear that Joni. Take care of yourself and rest❤
xoxoxoxo…..💕🤗
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Love and thanks to you Ishita. ❤️🤗🦋
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❤🤗💕
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