My sorrows are faceless.
Even in a deep slumber, they poke me.
Endless.
The sky bleeds orange red.
Promise of a new day. But, bleeding. Blood.
…..death?
Oh no. I just heard a crow.
Will my pain amplify now? Or just the opposite.
Who knows.
Yes, my sorrows are faceless.
They possess a multitude of masks, though.
Oh dear. I’m sorry. They’re calling me. I should go.
I don’t want to. But I don’t want to be broken either.
But…..they’ll break me in any case.
…right?
Nevertheless. I’ll try to be back.
Faceless.
– Ishita Gupta
A/N:- This is purely a work of fiction.
You’ve represented such an intense piece in such a beautiful and symbolic manner. Amazing work♥️🖤
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Aw..thank you so much. Your words touched my heart♥️♥️💞
Love and hugs🤗
Ishita
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Exceptional❤!! The way it is expressed…..splendid🤩! You are amazing Ishita!
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Aashi….thank you from the bottom of my heart. I’m so humbled by your words♥️💞 You are amazing too😁
Love and hugs🤗♥️♥️💞💞
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🤗❤💕
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Wooooaaaahhhhh
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💞💞💞💞😄😄😄😄 thank you!!!!!
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Stunning! The way it has been expressed….splendid! That too in such few words…your way with words is just wow!🤩
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You have left me speechless by your comment💞💞 Thank you so so so really much!!!!!♥️♥️🌹love and hugs to you🤗💐
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🤗🌌
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Beautifully written, Ishita. And I’m so glad that this was just fiction!
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Thanks a lot Shweta🥰💞💞
I’m glad too!!
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
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I am speechless, it is so so good and beautifully written 💙💙💙🤗
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Thank you sooo much Era!!!!🤩💞♥️♥️
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🤗💙❣
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Exceptionally well penned!!🤗🤗
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Aw…thanks a lot!!💞♥️♥️
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Amazing it is!!!….. The sky bleeds orange red… This line is just 😯…. Keep writing and sharing with us
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Thank you so much Komal!!! I’m so glad you enjoyed that line♥️♥️💞
Love and hugs🌺
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A painful thought expressed beautifully!!💜💫
Sorrows are faceless nut still they are masked. And behind those masks lay our secrets!
And yeah! they will break us not by our choice, but we gotta strike back only when we decide to.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and amazing interpretation.❣❣ I’m so glad you enjoyed this💞💞 Have a nice week dear♥️ love and hugs🤗
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Pleausre, Ishita.😃
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My sorrows are faceless, so am I.
This is fabulous work!
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Thank you so much Harsh!!!!😄❣❣🌺
xoxo
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What does xoxo mean exactly?
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Hugs and kisses
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Okay. Thanks!
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🙂
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No words.. ❤️❤️❤️
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Aw, thanks a lot❣❣
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Beautiful❤️ but painful!💔
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Thanks a lot BG!!♥️
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🤗❤️
How are you?
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I’m fine, just mentally tired because of all the studies😅🙈
How are you?
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Oh! You’re in college, right?
Me? I’m mentally tired with my office work and the whole shit that’s going around us these days.😢😢
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I would prefer my exact age to remain anonymous, so I’m not answering that question😂
Yes, everyone is pretty tired of the virus now. It will go away soon, I hope😢
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Hehe… I won’t even ask that to anyone but since you spoke about studies so I asked if you’re in college.😊
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Ya ya it’s fine😂
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🙄🙄
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🙈🤫
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😏
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Beautiful piece, Ishita 💙
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Thank you so much Katy!!!!💞♥️♥️
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Just a breathtaking piece Ishita. Dark and deep undertones of sorrow. Love the last line.
I wonder though if the rhyme is accidental or planned.
Either way it add a flair to your works. Wonderful.
Hugs.
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Thanks a lot Shanyu!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Means a lot coming from you.
I was planning to write a poem, but it turned out to be a piece of writing. I guess the rhyme was both accidental and planned! Thank you dear💞
Love and hugs❣
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You are welcome dearest friend.
It is a wonderful poem, and I’m glad to have read this. Whatsoever the rhyme may be, it was a nice touch.
Hugs
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Thank you once again Shanyu, I’m very touched♥️
xoxo
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My pleasure Ishita. Love!
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Beautifully written! Overflowing with emotions 😊🌸
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Thank you so much!! Means a lot💞♥️♥️🤗
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Ahhhh. Ishita. This went in to the deepest part of me. It’s incredible. And the angel picture that was above it….perfection. Sigh. Thank You. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much Katy, so glad you could resonate♥️♥️
The picture just fits so well doesn’t it? I found it on the internet.
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My pleasure, Ishita!!! And yes, it truly does fit perfectly!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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♥️
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They possess a multitude of masks, though.
Oh dear. I’m sorry. They’re calling me. I should go.
I loved these lines and how it ends.
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Thank you so much!! Glad you enjoyed it♥️💕💕❣
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🙂
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Beautiful & deep lines, Ishita.
FYI, I’m not able to subscribe your blog….some sort of error when I hit subscribe. Where is the follow button?
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Thanks a lot Navin!!♥️
That’s strange, because I received the notification of your follow…..🤔
WP is having a lot of problems since a few days😕
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Yeah…it has. I’ve missed around 85% of my followers. So I’m contact the most important ones individually to re-follow. I hear from others as well that there have been glitches with either notification or liking & commenting posts 😊
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That’s horrible!!! Even I have heard there have been glitches with others as well….
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Yeah….but I believe in things happen for a reason….there must be a reason to rebuild my network of followers from scratch….after over 3 years of my blogging period 😊
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That’s a positive view Navin!
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It is….it helps to come out of frustration as well 😉
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It definitely does!♥️
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❤️✨😊
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Deep, intense & beautiful!📝👌
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Thanks a lot!!❣😊
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Perfect example to show that the number of lines do not matter when you have a clear idea in mind.. and you know well how to express clearly.. all the pain and the tearing apart and the confusion.. beautifully done Ishita 🙂 No wonder am a fan of you ❤
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this beautiful comment!! So so so glad you liked it! I’m such a huge fan of your works too!! You are amazing!!😘😍😍♥️
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Am happy that my comment made your heart contented..
Thank you very much dear for the constant love you shower :)<3
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I wonder how I missed this exceptional piece, Ishita! Beautiful and intense…love it!❤️🌷
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Oh, thank you so much dearest Punam!! I’m touched by your words♥️♥️💕❣🌷
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Hello Ishita! 🙋💕 I love your magnificent poems!!! 😍❤️💖🥰
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Hello Yleniaely!! So so happy you love my works😊😍🤗🤗🌹♥️♥️❣💞
P.S. If you are fine with it, may I call you Ely?
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Yes, Thank you so much!!! 🥰💖💖💖😘❤️🌹
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🤗🤗♥️♥️😘😍
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Wowww 🤩🤩❣️❣️
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Thank you so much!!!!!😍😘🤗♥️
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Brilliant fiction! Pain is oozing out beautifully. ❣
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Oh my, thank you so much for your kind words Anisha!!♥️🤗😘
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My pleasure, Ishita! ❣
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Darkness is there but how you lighted upon it is beautiful.
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Thank you so much dear!♥️♥️🌷😊
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😊🤗😊🤗
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Ishita this is sad but very beautifully written, I hope school is going well and that you are finding some happiness in your busy life sweet friend. Sending you love, Joni
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Thank you so much my dear friend❤
Love and hugs to you🤗❣
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