My back
Greets the cold sand
A calm breeze
Tickles my bare hand
Blue spheres
Illuminate the dark sky
In dreams
They dance like fireflies
My mind
Clutches at memories long gone
Humming
A broken tune of an unfinished song
Black tresses
Fall over my damp eyes
You lured me
In your perfectly spun web of lies
Unspoken words
Are still lingering in this misty air
My broken heart
An agonizing proof I still care
Darling
I gave you all my love
Alas
I think I should have kept it gloved.
-Ishita Gupta
So well expressed!
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Thank you so much😘❤❤
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Beautifully penned Ishita!! Love the creativity and that photo is so aesthetic 💙🖤
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Thank you so much for your kind words Tanvi❤❤🌹
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This photo is of a “glowing beach”. Beaches where bioluminescent algae are present😊😊💕
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Oh wow! That must be a wonderful sight to see!😊
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Ya it must be…..😍
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Love your way with words!!
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Thank you so much Akshita❤ You made me smile😊💕
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My pleasure 🤗💐
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🌷💝
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Beautiful 😊
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Thank you. Glad you think so😊😘
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My pleasure 💙
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💕❤
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Tragic yet beautiful..sad yet caring..
everything expressed beautifully Ishita !!
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your sweet words Nima. Means a lot❤❤🌹
xoxo
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You are always welcome Ishita 🙂
You do write well 🙂
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Thank you once again❤
Have a wonderful evening💐💞
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You too 🙂
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Feels!❤️
“Black tresses
Fall over my damp eyes
You lured me
In your perfectly spun web of lies”
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Thanks a lot!! Glad you could resonate❤💕
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😊😊
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot!!💕
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That last line…so poignant! Beautifully expressed, Ishita. ❤️🌷
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Thank you so much Punam❤❤ So happy you liked it🌹💕
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You are welcome, dear. 🌷❤️
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I love what you have done with this. Beautifully written ❤️
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I’m so glad you loved it. Thank you so much❤💕
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This is so very beautiful, Ishita. Thank You. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you for the beautiful comment Katy. So glad you enjoyed it❤💕
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My pleasure, Ishita!!! 🤗❤️😊
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This is beautiful 😍
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Glad you found it beautiful. Thank you😘❤
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I have really read such a beautiful poem.
“My back
Greets the cold sand
A calm breeze
Tickles my bare hand”
Every line in this piece is superb. SUPERB.
“In your perfectly spun web of lies
Unspoken words”
WOW. Bravo!
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Thank you so much. Thank you from the deepest core of my heart❤❤ I am so so glad you enjoyed the poem Gabriela. You are amazing💕🌹
Sending lots of love, hugs, flowers, and blessings🌺💝
Ishita❤
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My pleasure Ishita. You are an excellent writer. You should know that.
Thank you for the love, the flowers, the hugs and the blessings. Right back to you sweetheart..
xoxoxo
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Thank you once again dear❤❤💕
xoxoxoxo
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AMAZING WORK
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Aw..thank you so much❤💕
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Ishita this is truly beautiful. So many ways to describe heartache but you did so very beautifully here.
“They dance like fireflies My mind Clutches at memories long gone Humming A broken tune of an unfinished song”
I love fireflies they hold magic for me. Every line gorgeously constructed telling us of her misplaced love.
I was walking with you. So lovely my dear friend. I hope you weekend was filled with love and happiness. Please continue to be careful my friend.
Sending butterflies wrapped in a long line of silk threads with fireflies leading the way this evening. When you see them you will know it is me sending love. ❤️💕💖 Joni
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Joni, you have left me speechless, breathless by your comment. Your beautiful words touched my heart. I’m so humbled❤ Thank you for being my friend, I’m so really fortunate. You are a beautiful soul. I’m touched beyond words, sweetheart💖
I will be on the watch for the beautiful butterflies and fireflies, looking through my garden window.
Stay safe and take care🌹❤
Lots and lots of love to you😘💕💕💕
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I meant every word. I am painfully honest or so I have been told all my life. You write beautifully.
I hope you see the fireflies through your garden window. I want to encourage you like beautiful Button did me, (Gabriela). Have you been sending your work out for publication? If not perhaps you should. I am not Gabriela, I believe her work will be taught to students everywhere some day, because her beautiful words and style are so unique and captivating. Yet, she certainly encouraged me, which was all it took, because her heart holds love and she wants to share her wonderful success. She is a truly special gift. If you are published please let me know. If not I certainly think you could be my friend. It feels so wonderful to see your work published. I will always be grateful to Gabriela (Button) for her gentle push.
Sending love to you and encouragement about your beautiful writing.
Yours, Joni 💕❤️🤗💖
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You are such an amazing and sweet and kind soul❤ And Gabriela is a gem too💖 Both of you have and continue to encourage and inspire me so much!! And in my humble opinion, both Gabriela’s and your works are going to be taught to students❤❤ You both are a wonderful gift to poetry, and writing💕💕
Two of my poems were published in a book “Uncaged: A Teen Anthology”
https://thoughtsresonate.home.blog/2020/05/18/a-great-news/
The links for the e-book and kindle version are in this post.
Currently, I’m exploring this enchanted and beautiful world of poetry❤ I do plan on publishing my work💕💕 I am relatively new to poetry, even. It’s been just one and a half years, since I started poetry! I have travelled a lot since then, explored myself more. And got to know such beautiful souls and poets like you❤❤
Love and hugs
Ishita💕💕💖
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Oh my goodness this is wonderful news. Congratulations I did not see this post. This is great my friend. I just tweeted your information. I read the inserts just gorgeous words, so beautifully written. That is magnificent my friend. You are already on your way. Thank you for sharing this with me. I bet your family is so proud of you. I sure am. What a blessing. This is delightful to hear. This makes my day. Love 💕 and hugs 🤗, yours Joni 🎉🎊🎉
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Joni, you have made beyond happy by your words❤❤ I love you so much. What else can I say?
Thank you for your immense support and love my dearest friend❤❤
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❤️💕
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I love your choice of words to portray the emotional feelings Ishita. Absolutely beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much Radhika! I’m so happy you enjoyed it💕❤❤🌹
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Hi!
I nominated you for sunshine blogger award!
https://themysticwagon.wordpress.com/2020/07/03/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Aw….thank you so much! I’m so touched by this gesture❤❤
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Ishita, you have created something of real beauty here. This is marvellous dear❤❤❤
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Oh Roshni dear, you humble me with your praise❤❤ Thank you so much💕
Love and hugs💖
Ishita🌷
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It’s my pleasure to have come across such talent ❤️…Keep writing dear friend, for words have such a calming effect (one of my friends told me this today)
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Thank you once again Roshni❤💕
Yes! They sure do❤❤ You keep writing too sweetheart. Haven’t seen any new posts from you?
Hope you are doing well💕💕
xoxoxo
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Will write soon hopefully….and I’m good . Thank you so much, dear❤️
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I’m glad to hear you’re good. Write whenever you feel like❤💖
xoxoxoxo
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Such a sad ending but a lovely poem nonetheless. 👌🤗
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Thank you so much❤🌹💖
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This is heartbreaking💔😭
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💔💔❤
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Well written!!💕💕
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Glad you think so! Thanks a lot!♥️♥️❣💕💞
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My pleasure!!💕💕
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Hey…I have a small request to make…check out my blog when you have time!!🤗🤗
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I did check out your blog……didn’t I follow you???? Gods, WP is not in it’s right senses😂 Will follow you just now!
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No problem!! WP has lost its senses since morning…I was doing the same thing in morning!!😅😅
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🤦🏻♀️🙈😁
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🤣🤣
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Lies are always there upon his lips…
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Hmm….maybe….
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Spare few mins to check my blog too…
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I will as soon as I have time
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I’ll wait for your viewpoint…
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