She is standing amidst thousands of people, yet she feels alone. As if they were just illusions, a dark trick, of her twisted mind. Her shoulders feel heavy, from the burden they had been carrying for years, invisible. Neon signs illuminate the night, but her eyes can only see the dark. “Colours” is a foreign word.
She starts walking towards what she understands to be her home. Home. A curious word, really. She isn’t sure whether she has a “home” or is just a wanderer. But isn’t everyone a wanderer?
Eventually, a building comes into sight. It looks unfamiliar to her. She goes through the glass doors, and meets a grand staircase. She just continues to walk, as if in a trance. But she stumbles, and her hands grip the iron railing. They are moist. From sweat or her worries, no one really knows. Her grip falters, and she falls.
She keeps falling, just never stops. As if she were falling into Tartarus. As soon as this thought hits her, a swarm of invisible knives pierce her. Her body writhes in agony, but she refuses to die. She screams, shouts, yells, but it falls on deaf ears. Even she doesn’t hear herself. Her vision goes blank.
Her torturous descent suddenly stops. She hovers in midair. Her body is numb, and sore from invisible wounds. She gives in; unable to hold on much longer. A maniacal laugh escapes her mouth as she bursts into ashes.
-Ishita Gupta
Wow Ishita!! Beautifully written post! You’ve expressed the feelings of the girl in such a wonderful manner!!🖤
“But isn’t everyone a wanderer?” This is such a wise line!
Beautiful 💕💕
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Thank you so much Tanvi💕💕 So happy you could resonate with it❤
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Great post.
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Thank you! Glad you think so🍀🌸
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Wowww! An amazing post! Emotions of the girl expressed so beautifully!
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Thanks a lot Aashi for your kind words❤❤
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My pleasure!
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❤
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Woaahhh!!! This is so fantastic!! Superb post!!
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Thank you so much Harsh! You brought a smile😉 to my face😀
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I love the emotionless emotion so powerfully described and painted. The feeling fills the empty space with emptiness. Very amazing!!
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Thank you so much! “…fills the empty space with emptiness.” Only you can think of such a thing😁 You should use that in your writings sometime.
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I agree with Watt, you have captured the ‘empty space in emptiness’, the darkness in the light, the numb within the pain, the gray within the colour. The silent scream. Love it.
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Oh thank you so much my dearest Rachel❤ It feels good to know that my writing resonates with fellow writers. I’m so happy you love it❤💝
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It really is my pleasure to read and know you Ishita ♥️🌷
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😘😘💕
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This is just WOW!
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Thank you!! This means a lot❤❤😘
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My pleasure 💐💐
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💕💝
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This is so good ❤
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Glad you think so💕❤
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This is a powerful expression of so many haunting feelings. They are beautifully written my friend. I love the way you end this piece with your last four lines. So expressive you can feel her floating. Have a blessed weekend dear friend. Love 💕 and hugs 🤗 Joni
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Oh thank you so much my sweet friend. Your words humble me❤❤ Have a wonderful weekend too❤
Love and hugs
Ishita💕💕❤
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🌸❤️😘
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Mind blowing!! Splendid!! Awesome!!
Love this masterpiece! ❤❤
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Thank you so much! Means a lot❤💕
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You’re most welcome. 🤗
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Damn and WOW. Left stunned. This is so strong. So sad and poignant. Powerful. Thank You, Ishita. ❤️
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Aw..thank you so much Katy💕💕 Lots of love to you❤❤
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Absolutely my pleasure, Ishita. And Thank You! Lots of love right back to you!!! 💕💕💕
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Woww, beautifully written Ishita.
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Thanks a lot! ✨❤❤💕
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