Trapped in a tartarean soul
Hidden behind her dark shadows
She sits inside a melancholic shroud
Filled with petals from a black rose.
Her tears form a bottomless pit
Her screams compose a haunting melody
Watching the world with misty eyes
She weaves a basket to hold her memories.
Slowly succumbing to her inner paralysis
She struggles to find a glow
But in the hollowness of her ruptured soul
A light shines from below.
Embracing the kaleidoscopic warmth
She feels like a free bird
Free to soar the skies and the world
She witnesses her heavenly rebirth.
-Ishita Gupta
Amazing Ishita! Iโm speechless!! This is very well written!! Your vocabulary is also flawless!! Keep up the awesome work!โค๏ธ๐๐
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Thank you so much dear Tanvi. You shower me with praisesโค๐๐
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You always deserve them โบ๏ธ
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Fabulous Ishita.. I so loved this one.. Rebirth !! ๐ โค
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Thank you Nima! So glad you loved itโคโค
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Great!! This is amazing!
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Thanks a lot๐โค
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Welcome ๐
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So amazing!
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Thank you๐๐๐ธ
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So beautifully written! ๐
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Thank you so much Rachelโค๐
How are you my friend?
Take care๐โค
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How beautifully do you write! http://shanyu.blog/2020/06/10/the-original-outstanding-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much Shanyu. I’m really touched. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for nominating me. It means a lot!
Take care and stay safeโค
Ishita๐
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You are always welcome! You deserved it!
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So abstract, so beautiful, so powerful! This is amazing!!! Wow!!
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Thank you so much Shreya! I’m so glad you liked it๐
Love and hugsโคโค๐
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Didn’t like it. Loved it! ๐๐๐๐
Love and hugs to you too! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Oh thank you so much Shreyaโค๐
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Beautiful poem ๐๐ค
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Thank you! Glad you think so๐ธ๐ธ
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This is so very beautiful, Ishita! Thank You!!! ๐คโค๏ธ๐
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Thank you so much Katy๐๐โค So happy you liked itโค
xoxoxo
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Absolutely! โค๏ธโ๏ธ๐ท
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This is very beautiful. Full of metaphors and deep emotion. I love this.
โHer screams compose a haunting melody โจWatching the world with misty eyes โจShe weaves a basket to hold her memories.โ
You have written a lovely piece here my friend. You have captured deep sadness with beautiful words.
Have a blessed weekend filled with inspiration and love. Sending you a bucket of bottomless hugs and love. ๐บ๐ธโค๏ธ๐๐ Joni
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Thank you from the deepest core of my heartโค Your words have made me the happiest person on this planet๐น I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem๐๐
Have a wonderful week filled with love, and smilesโคโค
Ishita๐๐
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My pleasure your writing is gorgeous Ishita, my friend. ๐๐
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