swaying
her body
along the tune
looking
godly
an artist’s muse.
beneath
her feet
a splintered floor
in sweet
dreams
a velvet door.
breaking
inside
feeling insane
shaking
outside
to soothe the pain.
postures
sliding
fluidly to another
worries
enveloping
like a black smother.
counting
beats
she felt in her heart
dancing
greets
a sad form of art.
-Ishita Gupta
Thoughts Resonate 
This was such a lovely poem!! And the third stanza just stole my heart!! Always a pleasure to read your poems Ishita!!💕
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Thanks a lot Tanvi! Your support means a lot🌸❤
xoxoxoxoxo
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The last stanza is explosive!!! Counting beats!!!
W O W. Absolutely incredible and amazing.
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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
This means a lot!! 🌷🌷❤
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Beautiful
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Glad you think so!🌸🌷
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Such a lovely opening stanza, Ishita! And then the mood changes so dramatically. 🌷
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Thanks a lot Punam!🌸😍
xoxoxoxo
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My pleasure, dear. 💞🌷
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🌹❤
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This is super nice!
And loved the lines
“breaking
inside
feeling insane
shaking
outside
to soothe the pain.”
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Thank you so much! This means a lot🌸🌷
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful, Ishita
“dancing greets a sad form of art.”
💕💕
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Thanks a ton, Rachel!❤❤💕
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Splendid Ishita. Dancing to the tunes of a painful heart. WOW!
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Thank you so much dear Gabriela😍❤
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My pleasure
xoxoxo
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So lovely. Thank You! 💕
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart!❤❤
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My pleasure!!! 💕
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🌷❤
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Enjoyed every word of it. Phenomenal.
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Thank you so much🌸🍁
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I love your title to this piece and all your lines. I particularly enjoyed “counting beats she felt in her heart dancing greets a sad form of art.
Beautiful my friend. Hugs Joni
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Thank you so much Joni😘❤ I’m so happy you found this beautiful. Hugs to you too💕😘
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🌸🌺💕❤️
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😘❤
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Oh I love dance. The swaying of a breeze in a sultry sea! It conveys the whole body, soul and mind. You capture an essence of the art form beautifully in your poem. 🥰❤️🎶
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I love dance too! It fills me with so much pleasure which I can’t put into words. Thank you so much for your sweet words❤❤❤
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