Standing in the midst of silent waters,
A bunch of memories greeted her.
How blissful were those days,
Those moments, he used to embrace her.
How soon everything changes,
She realized with a sudden jolt.
There was once a time of happiness,
But now it was filled with shocks.
There was once a period,
When her eyes used to shimmer.
But now those captivating eyes,
Had completely lost their glimmer.
Slowly coming back to the present,
She stole a glance at her hand.
There were a bunch of photos,
Which she lovingly cradled in her hands.
The last of the tangible memories,
She held them close to her heart.
Remembering the day he died,
She lost an important part.
She couldn’t stop the tears now,
Preparing herself for the dive.
To reunite with her lover, she-
Jumped to never come out alive.
-Ishita Gupta
Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot!!
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I had goosebumps 🥶
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Oh my…..that’s such a kind compliment!! I couldn’t ask for more!! Thank you, thank you🙏
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You’re very welcome 😁 I’d love your critique on some of my writing, I’m sure I’ll get a unique perspective!
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You are too kind….but you write beautifully as well…checked out some of your writings
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Great writing!! The end was just so well written!!
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Thanks a lot Tanvi!!! 💗
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Amazing!
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Thank you!😊
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Did she willingly lose her life because she could not live without him? Is that the message?
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Yes she did take her life because she couldn’t live without him….sometimes love does that to us…
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Thanks. I know but shouldn’t true love make us strong. Just wondering.
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I guess it’s both ways…
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